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Crestchan, June 4th, 2014, 6:35 am ( Reply )

oops
Well as I uploaded this I made a slight mistake. I hit submit when I didn't mean too. So I uploaded without a comment, but that is an easy fix.
Anyways as this guy says no one actually told Mika she had to go through with it. I am wondering if anyone feels this was rushed.

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Mystearen, June 4th, 2014, 7:46 am ( Reply )


Just read it all, so one big comment xD
Story:
I have a feeling she'll consider it, and even mention it to Fuko. But will ultimately stay with her. Or if she does end it....

Once Mika figures out the whole "defeated by" thing was an excuse, Fuko didn't even have to brush it under the rug, or lie about it "She fell and landed on me" in truth, Fuko SAVED her, wasn't defeated by her. Fuko could have spun that any way she wanted and been honest. Plus, Fuko is a very doting girlfriend.

I'm not yet sure if Fuko is having Ako and Bko protecting her, or if they picked up on Fuko's crush and are doing it of their own accord. I think the later would be better, but either way I think it'd pan out well =3

Also, obvious friend future side couple is obvious. Ako x Yumi. But now i'm curious as to Ako and Bko's real names. xD

Plus I also think Fuko told Yumi about the whole thing so Yumi would stop avoiding Mika o.o so Yumi has a little respect for Fuko xD

Overall i'm really liking the story, I don't think I've seen a yuri actually take this type of approach, now sure we've had the Tough girl/Yakuza x average girl/class prez/disciplinary chief . but they're usually friends or something prior. So i'm curious and excited to see where this goes =D

Art: Don't take these as negative, they aren't intended to be :0
I feel your backgrounds are kinda weird, to many shimmers or "mood" backgrounds for my taste, sometimes the BG's are out of place, like during the fall. They were in school but you used a brick floor for the BG o_O; I highly doubt a Japanese school, or any school for that matter would have brick floors xD
Additionally the characters all move rather....stiffly.
and finally, everyone has the exact same body. The whole 3-4 guys share the same body, and every female does as well(though scaled differently) during one of the covers, the main 5 girls are all walking, and everyone is the exact same with a different head.

The first is an artistic choice, the second is a shame due to how well you actually do the anatomy o,,o third as well as second I do believe will be improved with time, so i'll probably be following you for a long while =3



PS: I love Ako's shirt, and both Ako and Fuko are so cute with the girls they like ;D

Crestchan, June 4th, 2014, 9:27 am ( Reply )



@Mystearen: Oh my. That is the longest Comment I have ever gotten.
Thank you for your opinion. I am using a program called "ComiPo!" for this. It is great in the fact that I can make and pose the characters or change the size or even rotate them how ever I want with out having to remake the character, but sadly all the poses are pre-made and I can't mess around too much with them, the backgrounds are all 2D (but the characters are 3D) and all but the school stuff come from a lot of sources so they are either in a different style, so I find myself using the "mood" backgrounds too much. I am trying to fix that. There are only two types of bodies, which are Male and Female, even the teachers are no different. They only got different clothing, and so far no update on what they wear.
So sadly with ComiPo! I have very little control on a lot of that stuff. I mean I could try but then I would have to make each pose personally and each character, and that is too far out of my expertise with making 3D stuff.

Mystearen, June 4th, 2014, 5:09 pm ( Reply )


OIC Software limitations...
That's a horse of a different color.

Feel free to disregard my comments on that then =P one way or the other, I do like the route the story is taking and look forward to seeing it through =D

Crestchan, June 4th, 2014, 6:56 pm ( Reply )



@Mystearen: Well thank you for you opinion on it anyways. Hopefully I do not disappoint.

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